Elevator pitch practice 2

1.) The feedback that I got from my last pitch was to mention price, and go into a bit more detail about my product and how it works. The problem wasn't that I neglected to mention these things just the depth of it, especially in regards to the time constraint. I think the only advice that I got that was wrong was to mention a company and my name because I know that information is not needed. I mentioned how this product would get me money, but maybe not in the traditional sense as you will see. I made sure to go into detail and mention pricing in regards to my product. I did not however mention target audience and that is becasue my product is virsitile in that regard that i did not want to put a restrictin on it.
I hope you guys enjoy my pitch and I can't wait to hear your feedback.


https://youtu.be/OltU_QSX6SQ